The grammar was good and the punctuation was good, too. Sex desi 13 comments«123»Anonymous readerReport 2015-01-03 22:01:31The story looks like its unfinished…but good story tho!Anonymous readerReport 2010-03-27 11:52:23HEY! Maybe by blackmailing her not to rat her out in exchange for a life of servitude or something like that.Anonymous readerReport 2008-05-28 12:56:19u suck… 13 comments«123»Anonymous readerReport 2015-01-03 22:01:31The story looks like its unfinished…but good story tho!Anonymous readerReport 2010-03-27 11:52:23HEY! Maybe by blackmailing her not to rat her out in exchange for a life of servitude or something like that.Anonymous readerReport 2008-05-28 12:56:19u suck… prt 1 was great!Anonymous readerReport 2008-09-24 16:18:38Personally I would have liked it more if she had been able to travel back home and get revenge on her sister. 13 comments«123»Anonymous readerReport 2015-01-03 22:01:31The story looks like its unfinished…but good story tho!Anonymous readerReport 2010-03-27 11:52:23HEY! this is a good story«123»
