Good Luck. Examples: then instead of than (they actually have different meanings); “grab my hand” instead of “grabbed my hand”; “pushes me gentle back” should be “pushes me gently back”. sex hindi It makes the story much easier and enjoyable to read. I usually spend 25% writing and 75% editting. The few errors did not distract enough to make the story less intriguing. You could also try to imagine this is someone’s story that you’re reading. Keep it coming, you’ll get better as you go on. Also, after uploading it’s a good idea to edit again–to put back the spacing that was lost in the upload. 7 comments«12»anonymous readerReport 2011-03-19 14:41:38I’ll agree with the fact that your grammar effected your story.
