Who is Kurk? 6 comments«12»Dudley DowrongReport 2018-06-15 20:47:56I think you need to better identify & develop characters. Porn calm down and read the story a few times before postinganonymous readerReport 2011-02-03 05:27:10draaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaggggggeeedddd it out too long. Starting off, to me it was so confusing, I didn’t even get deep into the story. A reader shouldn’t have to read the story 2-3 times to learn the characters & their relationship to each other (including the 1st person telling the story). Who is Kurk? How are Gina & Tina related. 6 comments«12»Dudley DowrongReport 2018-06-15 20:47:56I think you need to better identify & develop characters. 6 comments«12»Dudley DowrongReport 2018-06-15 20:47:56I think you need to better identify & develop characters.
