2 comments«1»AquaMastaReport 2009-09-02 05:30:08Getting better, I like the story line but a little more “sex” or at least some touching would be nice. sex hindi 2 comments«1»AquaMastaReport 2009-09-02 05:30:08Getting better, I like the story line but a little more “sex” or at least some touching would be nice. =dreamer=«1» =dreamer=«1» also if you were to make it a bit longer and add a little discripion to some characters so we can kind of get a feel for them, get to know them a bit :p Great story, Hope to read more!Anonymous readerReport 2009-08-19 06:13:13The plot was interesting, but rushed and convoluted. It would have been fine to work in a little jail cell sex.
Actors:
Danny Wylde / Sofia Staks
