There were a number of errors that should be easily caught while proofreading. hqporner There were a number of errors that should be easily caught while proofreading. Still, I gave you a positive vote, the story line is good and definitely has potential for a series. There were a number of errors that should be easily caught while proofreading. Still, I gave you a positive vote, the story line is good and definitely has potential for a series. Still, I gave you a positive vote, the story line is good and definitely has potential for a series. Still, I gave you a positive vote, the story line is good and definitely has potential for a series.
