2 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2012-11-16 21:36:36Life may be shit BUT so is this story – or are you a poor wee lad who didn’t graduate PRIMARY SCHOOL. XXX Fucking Hopeless !!anonymous readerReport 2012-11-16 16:17:43Your Story seems to bounce around a lot. It could be a great story. There are soooo many miss-spelled words that it takes twice or three times as long to read it as it should. There are soooo many miss-spelled words that it takes twice or three times as long to read it as it should. It could be a great story. Keep trying, and use the spell checker and re-read your story to fix difficult spots.«1» It could be a great story. Spell check probably won’t help because quite often the words are spelt correctly – they’re just the wrong
