pick one!! watch the grammar, particularly your tenses. sex hindi pick one!! this series is very good so far, and i would love to see you take it somewhere great. this series is very good so far, and i would love to see you take it somewhere great. watch the grammar, particularly your tenses. watch the grammar, particularly your tenses. you had the same problem in part one, but get part three out soon!!Anonymous readerReport 2008-07-08 17:53:51Dude you deffently need to write a few moreAnonymous readerReport 2008-06-07 14:15:10good job but check your grammar. Your getting better!!!«123» I also liked the end where you fing out Jill has a boyfriend. You need to watch your tences… You need to watch your tences… 11 comments«123»IntriguedReport 2008-08-12 01:19:51So when is part three coming out?
