12 comments«123»Anonymous readerReport 2009-04-20 22:41:59it wasnt bad but it wasnt great, but most of the people who made these comments should go fuck themselves, they shouldnt be such fuckin jackasses if they didnt like the storyKISSS ASSReport 2008-12-22 05:28:19fuck what a crap! Amateur xxx This story has no head and no tail . . . . . . …the only tail here is the man’s penis. . . . . . …U sucker if U don’t know how to write a story don’t bring this shit USUCKERREADERReport 2007-12-25 01:12:39wow, you did good, acceptable writing. i’m proud. 12 comments«123»Anonymous readerReport 2009-04-20 22:41:59it wasnt bad but it wasnt great, but most of the people who made these comments should go fuck themselves, they shouldnt be such fuckin jackasses if they didnt like the storyKISSS ASSReport 2008-12-22 05:28:19fuck what a crap! 12 comments«123»Anonymous readerReport 2009-04-20 22:41:59it wasnt bad but it wasnt great, but
