It felt like you were just listing everything that happened. With not much detail. Anal sex A spell check run would have caught many errors. With not much detail. You should definitely make a part two. With not much detail. Detail matters. But still like I said, a great story 10/10«1» It felt like you were just listing everything that happened. And I agree with the other comment about being a virgin thing. But 1 thing is you said she was a virgin so no matter she would have felt pain when that guy rammed his dick in her pussy. You should definitely make a part two. 3 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2010-09-06 11:10:21It would have been an alright story line if u knew how to write properly.
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