I couldn’t get past the first few paragraphs before the spelling and grammar mistakes made me shake my head and leave.anonymous readerReport 2013-08-08 19:07:46A little quick to the action but still pretty damn good. I couldn’t get past the first few paragraphs before the spelling and grammar mistakes made me shake my head and leave.anonymous readerReport 2013-08-08 19:07:46A little quick to the action but still pretty damn good. Anal sex I suggest proof reading the story to make sure that you catch all the spelling mistakes, or get a text to voice program and have it speak you story. Please make a part 2.anonymous readerReport 2013-08-08 04:51:42Consider a lot of anal and some pee play too«12» I kinda got lost in a wall of text.
