7/10READERReport 2005-09-12 14:58:28to comment writer “Archaic”: You’re a worse speller than some of the so-called sex story “authors.” Come on, guy, Hemingway has only one “M.” and “primitive” doesn’t contain an “A.”
The story wasn’t bad at all, I thought. If we were reading for literary purposes we wouldn’t be reading free porn stories online. Sex video 7/10READERReport 2005-09-12 14:58:28to comment writer “Archaic”: You’re a worse speller than some of the so-called sex story “authors.” Come on, guy, Hemingway has only one “M.” and “primitive” doesn’t contain an “A.”
The story wasn’t bad at all, I thought. Your dialogue was very primative, your descriptions were juvenile, it just was not very entertaining. This story is sexy and that’s what matters to me! Structure counts, if we cannot tell where sentences and paragraphs are, how can we
