It only made me partially horny.READERReport 2005-03-10 15:25:32That was good, very hot, and very detailled…if i could make one suggestion, it would be that you kept changing tenses (going from past to present and back again)READERReport 2005-01-30 22:53:54Nasty, kinky, a little dirty and definitely sinful. Amateur xxx what’s ‘knickers’ anyway?READERReport 2006-01-18 18:49:52purity dum ass u write a lot for no reason don’t complain they did the best they could, 10/10 on my list, so read it and don’t complainREADERReport 2005-06-05 12:27:44pretty good but you could have gone into more detail with the sex. “i sucked his cock to get it wet, pulled my knickers off and rode him” isn’t poetic. It only made me partially horny.READERReport 2005-03-10 15:25:32That was good, very hot, and very detailled…if i could make one suggestion, it would be that you kept changing
