no more incest… Just work on making the stories longer and making the transitions make more sense. sex hindi You need more segues between events.«1» You need more segues between events.«1» the first chapter was good.. Make the switches new chapters or something.Anonymous readerReport 2008-08-05 03:09:55no no no no… Just work on making the stories longer and making the transitions make more sense. no more incest… Just work on making the stories longer and making the transitions make more sense. You need more segues between events.«1» But yeah, don’t switch so much between scenes. you have less and less gay sex…Anonymous readerReport 2008-06-23 16:33:42okay. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . … But yeah, don’t switch so much between scenes. the first chapter was good..
