This was just a snapshot in time. XNXX Nothing erotic, nothing to get even vaguely hard with. Nothing erotic, nothing to get even vaguely hard with. You could have done a lot with this story, but you wimped out and gave us three minute drivel. 7 comments«12»READERReport 2008-03-28 07:54:38i wanted a hard on but barely got flaccid.READERReport 2008-03-09 16:05:11It’s all been said. If you want to write, pay attention to the advice given.READERReport 2008-03-09 16:04:05Unfortunately it was too short. Was it even that long? 7 comments«12»READERReport 2008-03-28 07:54:38i wanted a hard on but barely got flaccid.READERReport 2008-03-09 16:05:11It’s all been said. If you want to write, pay attention to the advice given.READERReport 2008-03-09 16:04:05Unfortunately it was too short. Instead of dumping us into the meddle of a scene, try building a real story.
