The idea of the story is good, and I applaud anyone willing to complete a story that has stopped before it was finished, but in my opinion it needs a lot of work to live up to its potential. Indian xxx 3 comments«1»OvidReport 2010-05-09 09:21:40I don’t see the point of the fundamental changes in everyone’s characters; Dumbledore and Harry don’t view each other as equals (largely because they are not), Petunia is incredibly prudish and therefore unlikely to slip off for a little lesbian fun (with a witch, who she despises) especially with her husband at the same table, Dudley and Vernon should be bouncing between terror and rage. There obviously needed to be a change in Narcissa and Belatrix but their basic natures have been lost, which makes the whole point of
