Don’t get discouraged.«1234» The writing needs work and some structure. XXX The writing format, structure and construction are lacking in many areas. Don’t get discouraged.«1234» Read some of the higher percentage stories and see how they make the story real. The writing format, structure and construction are lacking in many areas. 17 comments«1234»bigdaddyg123Report 2014-12-30 07:31:08″A Secret Brother And Sister’s Secret Romance”- Twenty-two Year Old Brother Sean and Twenty Year Old Sister Mary. Why did she get pregnant the first time with her eight year old daughter Sarina Marie by someone else?? Don’t get discouraged.«1234» The good news, the story context and theme is of fairly good quality. 17 comments«1234»bigdaddyg123Report 2014-12-30 07:31:08″A Secret Brother And Sister’s Secret Romance”- Twenty-two Year Old Brother Sean and Twenty Year Old Sister Mary.
