it was going well.anonymous readerReport 2013-05-25 00:58:28you went from first to third person. Eporner xxx it was going well.anonymous readerReport 2013-03-31 20:24:26Excellent story, would like a continuation of it.oldeoldmanReport 2013-01-05 08:54:18thank you! it was going well.anonymous readerReport 2013-05-25 00:58:28you went from first to third person. 5 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2013-05-25 00:58:30you went from first to third person. it was going well.anonymous readerReport 2013-03-31 20:24:26Excellent story, would like a continuation of it.oldeoldmanReport 2013-01-05 08:54:18thank you! it was going well.anonymous readerReport 2013-03-31 20:24:26Excellent story, would like a continuation of it.oldeoldmanReport 2013-01-05 08:54:18thank you! it was going well.anonymous readerReport 2013-03-31 20:24:26Excellent story, would like a continuation of it.oldeoldmanReport 2013-01-05 08:54:18thank you! why? I look forward to more.«1» I look forward to more.«1» it was going well.anonymous readerReport 2013-05-25 00:58:28you went from first to third person. Switching from first to third person is troublesome but you are going good
