This is my first errotic story. XXX i’m sure I’ll get better as I start writing more.READERReport 2004-03-30 13:25:46Bad set up and grammar. Too easy.READERReport 2004-03-25 19:42:13Too short«12» This is my first errotic story. i’m sure I’ll get better as I start writing more.READERReport 2004-03-30 13:25:46Bad set up and grammar. 6 comments«12»Anonymous readerReport 2010-05-31 14:38:43Ever hear of spellcheckREADERReport 2004-04-16 12:31:35Please don´t write more storiesREADERReport 2004-03-30 16:09:04Hey guys, give me a break. i’m sure I’ll get better as I start writing more.READERReport 2004-03-30 13:25:46Bad set up and grammar. Too easy.READERReport 2004-03-25 19:42:13Too short«12» Too easy.READERReport 2004-03-25 19:42:13Too short«12» Too easy.READERReport 2004-03-25 19:42:13Too short«12» Way too short. i’m sure I’ll get better as I start writing more.READERReport 2004-03-30 13:25:46Bad set up and grammar.
