show us whats happening, don’t tell us.«1» Everytime I get the urge to maautrbste I just get my favorite sex toy put on a little lubricant and that’s all i need for a mind blowing orgasm.Anonymous readerReport 2009-08-08 04:57:14work on the rythm of your sentances. etc) what does she smell? sex hindi phone ringing? you do not grab our attention just because she is masturbating. bring us more into the picture. phone ringing? what does she feel? . … traffic outside? 4 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2013-01-22 21:49:01And I thought I was the sesnlibe one. show us whats happening, don’t tell us.«1» etc. also add more senses to the story. show us whats happening, don’t tell us.«1» Thanks for setting me straight.anonymous readerReport 2013-01-22 21:49:00Superoir thinking demonstrated above. 4 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2013-01-22 21:49:01And I thought I was the sesnlibe one.
