It lacked description and flow and of course your use of the English language was attrocious. 12 comments«123»anonymous readerReport 2012-09-21 02:22:08Thrilling , teasing , sensual and sexually exciting gradually told buildup which keeps me rivoted , aroused and eagerly wanting more . Asian xxx .Master_of_1Report 2012-01-01 17:21:48Very nice try but go at it again take ur time in ur writinganonymous readerReport 2011-12-31 03:18:56Wow Ive never seen so many people bitch about mistakes back the fuck off I read it just fine. It lacked description and flow and of course your use of the English language was attrocious. .Master_of_1Report 2012-01-01 17:21:48Very nice try but go at it again take ur time in ur writinganonymous readerReport 2011-12-31 03:18:56Wow Ive never seen so many people bitch about mistakes back the fuck off I read it just fine.
