You could be a good writer if you really tried and made sure that the spelling was right before being submitted. xx video good story i guess, spellcheck major, and make it longer, what kinky stuff did they do?Anonymous readerReport 2009-02-23 13:12:30Maybe next time you should make up names because “Brother” and “sis” aren’t every realisticREADERReport 2008-01-22 17:08:53On the one hand, the others are right, this could do with a little polish, some elbow grease, and a spell checker. Believe me, that’s higher than what i normally rate most of the stories i have read. . You could be a good writer if you really tried and made sure that the spelling was right before being submitted.
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