I WANNA BICTHSLAP YOU SO MUCH RIGHT NOW! paragraphs are your friend, use them! hqporner i like your style.anonymous readerReport 2011-10-11 00:44:19it was just a huge glob of poop, needs more order.anonymous readerReport 2011-10-11 00:43:04it was just a huge glob of poop, needs more order.anonymous readerReport 2011-09-23 10:17:37totally agree, a waste of time to TRY to read this mess. 9 comments«12»anonymous readerReport 2012-01-06 04:14:15YOU MOTHER CHOAD WANK SACK! YOU STUPID RUSSIAN DIPLOMACY DICKWIPE! I WANNA BICTHSLAP YOU SO MUCH RIGHT NOW! I WANNA BICTHSLAP YOU SO MUCH RIGHT NOW! keep writing. a little dialogue makes the story more interesting, but only if it makes sense«12» YOU STUPID RUSSIAN DIPLOMACY DICKWIPE! I WANNA BICTHSLAP YOU SO MUCH RIGHT NOW! I WANNA BICTHSLAP YOU SO MUCH RIGHT NOW! :)anonymous readerReport 2011-11-18 13:26:57i love the story.
