Poor writing style as well.anonymous readerReport 2011-12-18 23:32:36too long, did not readanonymous readerReport 2011-12-18 19:25:20You kinda need to work on your paragraphing ^_^ The story itself was great, but that big paragraph is quite off-putting, so work better on your paragraphs on your next story 😀 xsmeegin2Report 2011-12-18 11:04:12Nobody comments much, so I will. Sex desi Boring predictable and yes every teen age guy has a 9″ cock. More to cum???«1» Poor writing style as well.anonymous readerReport 2011-12-18 23:32:36too long, did not readanonymous readerReport 2011-12-18 19:25:20You kinda need to work on your paragraphing ^_^ The story itself was great, but that big paragraph is quite off-putting, so work better on your paragraphs on your next story 😀 xsmeegin2Report 2011-12-18 11:04:12Nobody comments much, so I will. Boring predictable and yes every teen age guy has a 9″ cock.
