It would be a bit better if there was the space between paragraphs because it can get a little bit confusing to the idiots who read it obviously :Danonymous readerReport 2012-03-28 09:26:21Fuck u dumb ass, apparently this is ur first time reading, see the indents on the end, in case u didn’t know thats where he took word document clicked 1.0 spaces and said remove line after paragraph dumb shitanonymous readerReport 2010-12-06 20:16:03to hard to read ever heard of a thing called PARAGRAPHS they work wonders. Well thought out and well developed story-line. Eporner xxx It was a good story and i didnt notice any grammatical errors that were obvious enough to see them in one read without scanning for them.
