I agree, great story line, but very hard to read. I couldn’t read this. Japanese xxx I agree, great story line, but very hard to read. I couldn’t read this. I got lost immediantly because I didn’t know who was talking.«1» I felt it ran together, and got a bit jumbled up.Anonymous readerReport 2009-04-24 22:34:32WOW. I agree, great story line, but very hard to read. I couldn’t read this. I got lost immediantly because I didn’t know who was talking.Anonymous readerReport 2009-04-20 21:44:26Could you possibly put quotations to seperate who is talking. Dude– PROOFREADING is a Good thing! I agree, great story line, but very hard to read. I got lost immediantly because I didn’t know who was talking.«1» It had all the tags for a great story,
but it was totally UNreadable!!!Anonymous readerReport 2009-04-20
