I apologize if I insult you, but I feel you have potential. sex hindi I write and sell a few stories. Don’t be clever until you first become a writer. Right now you are trying to be clever. 3 comments«1»aceofhartsReport 2008-10-27 07:55:27Excellent story!!!!! i was definatly captured all the way to the end. a simple story line whould have worked much better. 3 comments«1»aceofhartsReport 2008-10-27 07:55:27Excellent story!!!!! Right now you are trying to be clever. Right now you are trying to be clever. a simple story line whould have worked much better. The “D” was pure hoke. Why not try to tell a straight story that starts at the beginning and stops at the end?




















