7 comments«12»Anonymous readerReport 2014-07-12 02:44:36ur grammar is the only problem I had with this. Sex video yry and make it more of a pleasure to read. more chapters and soon. I have a headache jhst trying to read through the maze of landmines u left there. u might want to make this story ur own. more chapters and soon. yry and make it more of a pleasure to read. yry and make it more of a pleasure to read. leave jwdd with his fire class.Anonymous readerReport 2014-04-18 01:10:14Hi like the story but are you going to put out more chaptersAnonymous readerReport 2014-04-13 01:52:25Hi like to story but are you going to put out more chaptersanonymous readerReport 2013-04-05 07:29:19Yep thats kwl i just didnt know if u realised it yourself or not, but good story cant wait
