i cummed a little!~!!!!anonymous readerReport 2013-01-04 13:16:51It seems a bit rushed. I couldn’t get a feel for the characters. Sex desi The sex was fine, but I was having trouble with the flow of the story. I couldn’t get a feel for the characters. All in all, I give this piece a 4 out of 10.«12» I couldn’t get a feel for the characters. Awesome story ☺Could use a bit more detail but otherwise epic!Anonymous readerReport 2014-10-10 21:46:00I thought her name was kagome not kigome.anonymous readerReport 2013-09-14 19:22:08i loved it i did not get some sentences but my dick go longeranonymous readerReport 2013-01-28 23:18:16hey good awesome!! I couldn’t get a firm grasp of the characters. I couldn’t get a firm grasp of the characters.
