not bad«12» The language was average (please never ever say ‘love tunnel’ again), the structure was OK, the plot left a little to be desired. That said, it’s not a bad story–you could rewrite it by filling it out. hqporner not bad«12» terrible grammar; terrible sentence structure and spelling. It ruined the story totally. The language was average (please never ever say ‘love tunnel’ again), the structure was OK, the plot left a little to be desired. It ruined the story totally. The language was average (please never ever say ‘love tunnel’ again), the structure was OK, the plot left a little to be desired.
Actors:
Estella Bathory
