have her doing moreanonymous readerReport 2011-04-13 11:16:19gave you a positive but you could have done alot more with it. Having him realy put her though her paces. Sex desi Having him realy put her though her paces. Having him realy put her though her paces. keep it going but make it longer as your just starting to get hard reading itanonymous readerReport 2011-04-12 23:18:40So he’s a fag. You’ve earned this NEGATIVE VOTE.anonymous readerReport 2011-04-12 21:46:16to short it could have been a hole lot better it a great start to a story u just need more detail and u have a great hit.«1» 4 comments«1»demck23Report 2011-04-18 12:58:50good story line just have more action & have him do more to her . keep it going but make it longer as your just starting to get hard reading itanonymous
