“What”, I said. Asian xxx Before publishing it looked fine (grammar was another matter as has been correctly pointed out) however, after it was published and I logged back on to the story site and noticed quotation marks, comma’s, etc, are replaced with questions marks ??? I’m not a techie guy and perhaps thats is not a problem but I don’t know or take the chance. I do love my Mom dearly but as strange as it seems saying it would have sounded and felt out of context ?. She had rolled onto her side with her back to me. Her breaths quickened then she gulped in a fast breath and held it.
