And yes I realize my spelling/grammar is bad. The English language was not my strong point«12» I remember some of my cousins :)Anonymous readerReport 2010-05-22 22:07:34try to make it a lil bit longer but itwas a good story..Patty AlReport 2010-05-19 21:51:33I would like to ask, what is more realistic then this actually happening. Japanese xxx 7 comments«12»anonymous readerReport 2013-12-07 19:42:21best thing you can do is DELETE everything and stop writing forever. I remember some of my cousins :)Anonymous readerReport 2010-05-22 22:07:34try to make it a lil bit longer but itwas a good story..Patty AlReport 2010-05-19 21:51:33I would like to ask, what is more realistic then this actually happening. IF you want to save this series DELETE it and get a GOOD WRITER to rewrite it and have THEM repost it you suck at writing.Anonymous readerReport 2010-07-07 23:19:17Yeah I
