15 comments«123»Anonymous readerReport 2016-02-08 21:36:57not too bad content of the story was good. I would barely give it a 1 out of 10. Japanese xxx Read the comments. use spell check and try to build the story a bit more. I was hooked.anonymous readerReport 2010-11-19 10:21:25This story is obviously the 1st one he/she has written. Aside from the atrocious spelling and grammar it lacked a flow. 15 comments«123»Anonymous readerReport 2016-02-08 21:36:57not too bad content of the story was good. If you want to write these stories, read what other good writers have written. I would barely give it a 1 out of 10. Read the comments.
