What kind of shit is that? lol Great Story though.Anonymous readerReport 2008-11-28 21:24:44Decent story
Pro’s:
Good Storyline
Not a half bad job with describing the sex. Porn What kind of shit is that? lol Great Story though.Anonymous readerReport 2008-11-28 21:24:44Decent story
Pro’s:
Good Storyline
Not a half bad job with describing the sex. Con’s:
You need more dialoge during the sex because all you mainly did was describe it, your next story needs to have more dialoge during sex.«12345» What kind of shit is that? 59 comments«12345»anonymous readerReport 2013-10-15 22:40:51good story but needs more storylineanonymous readerReport 2012-06-27 03:03:06hmmmmmmmm too bad you didn’t get to fuck her more. . . . . … lol Great Story though.Anonymous readerReport 2008-11-28 21:24:44Decent story
Pro’s:
Good Storyline
Not a half bad job with describing the sex.
