Normally such short sentences would make for choppy reading, but you did it so well that it really wasn’t noticeable after the first paragraph or so. Good work and Thank Youanonymous readerReport 2011-03-16 21:11:48Young Author, i was hooked on your stories the moment i started reading, I liked how this was a more unusual style of writing (short sentancing), for me the story worked. Amateur xxx You gave enough details to let my imagination take care of the rest, which I also appreciate, and which also helped get me hard while I read and saw the boys in my mind’s eye. Normally such short sentences would make for choppy reading, but you did it so well that it really wasn’t noticeable after the first paragraph or so.
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Ben Dover / Carla Cox / Carolyn Reese / Dirty Harry / Jennifer White / Justin Round / Karlie Simon / Kristi Klenot / Paul Chaplin / Victoria Paris
