5 comments«1»READERReport 2006-01-22 23:17:16SEQUEL!!!READERReport 2005-10-11 11:08:58well, thank u for commenting,
and @ yoyoyo, i’ve given me quite an idea, ill try and write something like that, have to talk to ‘cherie’ bout that :)READERReport 2005-10-10 00:15:53It was a piece of shit. Or you can switch into the body of one ofn the girls.READERReport 2005-10-09 02:20:22Fuck you Miker! XNXX You also don’t have to describe merely what he can see. 1/10READERReport 2005-10-09 15:58:48Miker’s an ass, don’t listen to that little fuck. You can work into the omniscient and show the scene, then revert to his angle. I fucking loved it! Or you can switch into the body of one ofn the girls.READERReport 2005-10-09 02:20:22Fuck you Miker! Give more detail..More of his emotions about it. I fucking loved it! Well done, make it longer. Well done, make it longer.
