Not just horrible writing but reminiscent of a middle schooler trying to be something they aren’t. hqporner Grow up, learn to write and come back when you are of legal age.anonymous readerReport 2012-09-13 03:06:27waste of time and effortanonymous readerReport 2012-09-13 01:27:39You and yours…this kind of writing sucks! Grow up, learn to write and come back when you are of legal age.anonymous readerReport 2012-09-13 03:06:27waste of time and effortanonymous readerReport 2012-09-13 01:27:39You and yours…this kind of writing sucks! Every time I see it I won’t read the story. …anonymous readerReport 2012-09-12 21:50:10Yeah, what he said VVanonymous readerReport 2012-09-12 16:00:08if it was in first person i think i would have liked it , as it is i couldn’t get past the first paragraph«1» Not just horrible writing but reminiscent of a middle schooler trying to be something they aren’t. 5
