It does get tedious at times trying to follow the story line. Indian xxx Please stop writing and find another hobby. Be my mom sis or daugher?:) texy 6025702936anonymous readerReport 2013-09-23 19:46:20Switching points of view between the characters is a technique this author uses in almost all of his stories. Please stop writing and find another hobby. My question for BLUEHEATT himself is, “Why are you re-posting some of your stories?”
This story was first posted on 06-22-2012, under the same title, almost verbatim, except for the last few lines of the ending.PenKnave193Report 2013-09-23 13:41:48On the whole not a bad story. is. dont be a pussy!anonymous readerReport 2013-10-06 00:34:09Oh the humanity! Keep writing!«12» Your stories are badly written rip offs of other much better authors.krc1993Report 2013-09-24 04:52:54Anu females age 18-45 wanna roleplay?
