Thanks !! Sex desi Thanks !! 7 comments«12»anonymous readerReport 2013-05-23 22:44:43A bunch of errors in the first para are not a good start
Did u not proof read or spellcheck???anonymous readerReport 2013-05-23 14:18:11Make a little longer b4 you end it.anonymous readerReport 2013-05-23 10:19:20Great story line but it ended too soon. Thanks !! Thanks !! (countrycadillac)anonymous readerReport 2013-05-22 20:48:18The premise is good but there are many errors. It really needs a rewrite and repost .anonymous readerReport 2013-05-22 19:37:04For awhile I thought it was a girl with the complaining and all try and state the sex in the beginning please«12» (countrycadillac)anonymous readerReport 2013-05-22 20:48:18The premise is good but there are many errors.
