If you write again which I don’t suggest. Sex video Before the first sentence the story had potential.. This was pathetic! Before the first sentence the story had potential.. This was pathetic! Try using spell check, a dictionary, and some proper grammerAnonymous readerReport 2010-03-29 11:03:21Shannon…go back to school. …or…are you still in school?? This was pathetic! This was pathetic! Give it up. …u DONT write well, there was NOTHING sexy or hot abt this story…just. …stop writing. …OR I if u insist on continuing – LEARN HOW TO WRITE BETTER & USE FUCKING SPELL/GRAMMAR CHECK!!Anonymous readerReport 2010-07-04 17:46:51Leave it; he’ll understand??! 8 comments«12»anonymous readerReport 2011-10-29 00:35:24PLEASE. . …STOP. . …WRITING!!!!!!! How the hell did u even GET an account – thru ur daddy? Please don’t continue«12» Take spelling!!Anonymous readerReport 2010-03-29 01:51:14This was fvckin stupid! You write like a half retarded twelve year old..
