The story is not bad, but the grammar errors make it too hard to read and enjoy.””
Seriously? worst grammar in a long time! Xvideos worst grammar in a long time! To dragoon173: Thank you for your efforts and for posting them here.anonymous readerReport 2013-11-05 12:01:40mistakes? IF you don’t like it go find another author to bitch at! Since he wrote this for us to enjoy FOR FREE I don’t see where you should demand anything! Since he wrote this for us to enjoy FOR FREE I don’t see where you should demand anything! The story is not bad, but the grammar errors make it too hard to read and enjoy.””
Seriously? worst grammar in a long time! To dragoon173: Thank you for your efforts and for posting them here.anonymous readerReport 2013-11-05 12:01:40mistakes?
